Here's a little treat -- a prose version of the first five pages of Rabbits Rising:
The young Rabbit made her way through the Garden of Iris toward the cathedral at the summit. The winding road, paved with cobblestones smoothed by the paws of many Rabbits before her, took her past raised garden beds where the assorted irises had just recently started to bloom. An early purple blossom reflected her formal robes that marked her as a member of the Order of Iris.
Rose adjusted the robes as she walked briskly up the path, trying to make herself look presentable after being called on short notice. She paused at the heavy oak doors, laying a paw on one to seek reassurance and familiarity from the solid piece of wood before proceeding into the large chamber.
Designed to accommodate hundreds of Rabbits for ceremonies and festivals, the main hall was much less crowded at the moment. Not empty, of course, as there was always business of the Order happening. Crossing in front of her, a white-robed older Rabbit headed to a side chamber where a group of young Rabbits were ready for school.
She continued on her way, down the left side of the great hall, and stepped into a colonnade leading to a more serious and far less busy part of the structure. Passing through a small courtyard, she saw Marcus, her superior, a middle-aged Rabbit in similar purple robes, waiting for her. Not saying a word, she fell in beside him as he led her onward.
They reached a private chamber, and Rose tried to steel her nerves, but she wound up hesitating and faltering slightly after seeing the Rabbit at the far end of the chamber. Iris. THE Iris. A woman in her early 50s, dressed in simple green robes, but still radiating a sense that she was the center of all of Rabbit culture and power.
Rose scrambled to catch up with her escort, who never broke stride for a second. Upon reaching the seated woman at the end, she dropped to one knee, bowing her head. “You summoned me, Mother?”
“Ah, Rose,” The Iris said, looking up from her papers. She signaled for Rose to rise, but with her eyes lowered, the signal was missed. Marcus gave Rose a nudge to get her attention. As Rose stood, she still kept her head lowered in respect as The Iris continued, “We have read your theories on why the wards at the frontier are showing weaknesses.”
Encouraged by this, Rose volunteered with a confidence and exuberance slightly out of place in the setting. “Oh, yes! For instance, it’s possible we’ve expanded further than the Great Mother originally intended…”
At Rose’s side, Marcus cleared his throat meaningfully as he stepped in front of Rose to cut her off before she could finish the mild heresy. Rose, realizing her error, blushed furiously and lowered her head further in embarrassment.
“I’m sure Rose means no disrespect to the Great Mother,” Marcus said diplomatically.
“Indeed,” The Iris dismissed the situation and redirected the discussion back to the point. “We did not summon you here to discuss your research. We have a mission for you.” Her voice adopted a formal, official tone, “Rose, you are charged to investigate these weaknesses in person and to report your findings directly to Marcus, Our servant and Petal of Strength. Thus is the command of Iris, eleventh of Our name.”
Rose’s bow shifted to fully formal as she replied. “Of course, Mother.” She straightened up and, understanding herself to be dismissed, turned and left the chamber, trying hard to stay calm and in control.
After Rose departed, Marcus gave The Iris a sly look. “May I speak freely, Mother?”
“Of course, Marcus. You are one of Our Petals. We require your unrestrained insight.”
“Do you think Rose is ready to wear that chain?” He indicated the silver chain around The Iris’ neck. She brought her paw to it, her fingers almost caressing it.
“Not yet. But We believe she has the potential. Give her what she needs to succeed, but let her do this on her own. We shall see if Our impression of her is correct.”