THE ELORIA TRILOGY
Lethal • The Return • Unbreakable
A tale of courage, pride, judgment, sacrifice, and the terrible price of being chosen.
Part I: Lethal
The Girl Who Slayed a Dragon
Eloria was fifteen years old when the dragon came.
It was a beautiful morning, the sort that promised nothing extraordinary. The summer sun hung over the fields, warming the grass and drawing the scent of wildflowers into the gentle breeze. Eloria was working alone on a hillside beyond her village, her thoughts occupied by the small concerns of an ordinary girl.
Then she heard the screaming.
At first, she thought it might be children playing. But the sound came again, sharper this time, accompanied by the distant clamor of bells.
The village bells.
They were ringing in alarm.
Eloria straightened and looked toward the hill separating the fields from her home.
A column of black smoke was rising into the clear blue sky.
Then another.
And another.
She dropped everything and ran.
By the time she reached the crest of the hill, she could feel the heat.
Below her, the village was burning.
People ran through the streets carrying children and whatever possessions they could save. Roofs collapsed in showers of sparks. Livestock broke free from their pens, scattering in terror. The screams of the injured mingled with the crackling roar of flames.
And in the village square stood a dragon.
It was enormous, nearly the size of a house, covered in dark scales that glistened like wet stone. Great leathery wings unfolded from its shoulders, and smoke curled from between its teeth. Its claws tore furrows through the cobblestones as it turned toward another cluster of fleeing villagers.
Eloria stood frozen.
She had heard stories about dragons. Everyone had. They belonged to the distant mountains and the forgotten ages, to the bedtime tales told by grandfathers and the songs of wandering minstrels.
They did not belong here.
The dragon opened its jaws.
A torrent of fire engulfed a nearby house.
Something inside Eloria broke free of her fear.
She ran downhill.
She pushed through fleeing villagers, ignoring their shouted warnings. She passed the well, the market stalls, the baker's shop with its shattered windows. She saw a wounded man struggling beneath a fallen beam and helped drag him clear.
Then she ran toward her own home.
Her father lay near the doorway, blood staining his shirt. He had tried to help defend the village and had been badly wounded.
He caught her wrist as she knelt beside him.
"Get out," he told her. "Take your mother and go."
But Eloria was looking past him, through the open doorway.
Above the hearth hung his sword.
It was an old weapon, plain and worn, handed down through generations. Her father had carried it when he was younger, although Eloria had never known him to draw it in anger.
She had held it before. He had even taught her a little of its use.
But she had never fought anyone.
Certainly not a dragon.
"Eloria," her father said, tightening his grip. "Listen to me."
She looked down at him.
Then she heard a child screaming somewhere in the square.
She gently pulled her hand free.
"I'm sorry, Father."
She entered the house, took the sword from above the hearth, and went back into the burning streets.
The weapon was heavier than she remembered.
Her hands trembled around its hilt.
She was terrified.
But the screams continued, and she knew what would happen if nobody stopped the creature.
The dragon turned as she approached.
For a moment, it simply stared at her.
A small girl, barely grown, standing alone in the street with a sword almost too large for her.
It lowered its massive head.
Eloria raised the blade.
"Leave them alone!"
The dragon roared.
The sound shook the windows and drove her backward. Its wings spread, blotting out the sunlight, and its jaws opened to reveal the terrible orange glow building in its throat.
Eloria threw herself behind the stone well.
Fire washed over the square.
Her exposed skin blistered from the heat. The stones against her back grew almost too hot to touch.
When the flames passed, she scrambled out and charged.
Her first strike glanced harmlessly from the creature's scales.
Its tail swept toward her.
She barely escaped, rolling beneath a market cart as the tail shattered the wooden posts behind her.
The dragon lunged.
Eloria stumbled backward, her sword catching one of its claws. The blade bit between two scales, drawing a thin line of dark blood.
The creature shrieked.
It could be hurt.
That was all she needed to know.
The battle became a desperate struggle through the ruined square. Eloria was faster, but the dragon was stronger beyond imagining. Every missed blow cracked stone or shattered timber. Every breath of fire threatened to end her life.
She was wounded. Exhausted. Barely able to lift her father's sword.
And still she fought.
Then she saw a little boy trapped beneath the remains of a collapsed cart.
The dragon saw him too.
Its head turned.
Eloria knew she could not reach the boy before the flames.
She screamed and ran anyway.
Something awakened inside her.
A warmth spread through her chest, down her arms, and into the sword. For one impossible instant, the worn steel shone with a pale, brilliant light.
Eloria leaped between the child and the dragon.
The creature unleashed its fire.
She raised the sword.
The flames broke around her.
She did not understand what was happening. She had no time to understand.
The dragon recoiled, and Eloria moved.
She sprang onto a heap of fallen masonry, then onto the creature's lowered shoulder. Its scales burned beneath her feet. One enormous wing struck her sideways, nearly throwing her to the ground.
But she held on.
With a final cry, she drove her father's sword into the vulnerable scales beneath its jaw.
The blade sank deep.
The light flashed.
The dragon convulsed, staggered backward, and collapsed into the square with a crash that shook the earth.
Then it lay still.
Eloria fell beside it.
For a long time, she could do nothing but kneel there, trembling, the sword hanging loosely in her hands.
The dragon was dead.
The village was saved.
And somewhere behind her, someone began to cheer.
Others joined.
Soon the square was filled with voices.
"Eloria!"
"Eloria!"
"Eloria!"
She turned toward them, confused and frightened, unable to understand why they were celebrating when so much had been destroyed.
She had only wanted to save her home.
She had only wanted to save the people she loved.
But the people saw something more.
They saw a hero.
And heroes, as Eloria would discover, are rarely permitted to remain ordinary people.
The making of a legend
The story spread beyond the village.
Within weeks, travelers arrived to see the girl who had slain a dragon. Within months, songs were being sung about her in distant towns. Kings and nobles sent messengers bearing gifts, invitations, and promises of reward.
The ruined village was rebuilt.
A statue of Eloria was raised in the square where the dragon had fallen.
She was embarrassed when it was unveiled.
The sculptor had made her taller, stronger, and more beautiful than she believed herself to be. He had placed a crown of laurels upon her head and depicted her holding her sword high over the defeated beast.
"That's not what happened," she protested.
But the villagers laughed.
"That's what ought to have happened," one of them told her.
And so the legend grew.
As Eloria grew older, people increasingly turned to her for protection and guidance. When bandits threatened the roads, she rode out to confront them. When neighboring villages were attacked, she came to their defense. When disputes threatened to become wars, rulers requested her counsel.
She possessed a strange natural strength, a courage that inspired others, and a gift for battle that no teacher could fully explain.
Around her gathered four extraordinary companions.
Mara, a formidable warrior whose shield had held against charges that would have broken lesser armies.
Tovan, an archer of astonishing precision, capable of striking a moving target at distances most men could scarcely see.
Serin, a healer and scholar, whose knowledge of old languages and forgotten powers proved as valuable as any sword.
And Dain, a brilliant strategist, whose calm intelligence had rescued entire towns from seemingly hopeless circumstances.
They became inseparable.
Together, the five accomplished remarkable things.
They defeated armies, ended feuds, drove monsters from the wilderness, and brought peace to lands that had known generations of violence.
Eloria became their leader.
Then a leader of thousands.
Then something approaching a queen, although she never formally claimed the title.
The people loved her.
More statues were built.
Great halls were named in her honor. Children were taught stories of her bravery. Minstrels celebrated her victories, sometimes before she had even returned from battle.
At first, she corrected their exaggerations.
Eventually, she stopped.
And somewhere along the way, the girl who had charged into a burning village because people needed her began to believe that she was extraordinary because she deserved to be.
She was no longer grateful for praise.
She expected it.
She was no longer surprised when others deferred to her judgment.
She demanded it.
Her companions remained loyal, but even they noticed the change.
When Mara questioned an increasingly reckless decision, Eloria dismissed her concerns.
When Dain warned that the eastern settlements were becoming vulnerable, Eloria declared that no enemy would dare attack lands under her protection.
When Serin suggested that the people had begun to depend too heavily upon her, Eloria laughed.
"Isn't that why we're here?"
And when Tovan asked whether they should ride out personally to investigate troubling rumors beyond the eastern mountains, Eloria waved him away.
"Let the local commanders handle it."
For eleven years, Eloria's legend had grown.
She was now twenty-six.
Her name was spoken with reverence.
Her victories were countless.
Her power was unquestioned.
And she had almost entirely forgotten the frightened girl who once stood alone in a burning street, holding her father's sword because somebody needed to act.
Part II: The Return
The Fall of Eloria
The first reports came from the east.
Entire villages had disappeared.
Travelers spoke of mountains burning at night, of rivers turned to steam, and of livestock found dead beneath skies blackened with ash.
Then came the survivors.
They arrived exhausted and terrified, carrying stories so extraordinary that Eloria's advisers initially refused to believe them.
A dragon had appeared.
Not merely a dragon.
A creature larger than any living thing they had ever imagined.
Its wings darkened whole valleys. Its claws tore trenches through the earth. Its fire could consume a fortified town in a single breath.
And it was moving west.
At first, Eloria treated the reports with skepticism.
Dragons were dangerous, certainly, but she had slain one as a child. In the eleven years since, she had faced enemies far more numerous and armies far more sophisticated.
She had never been defeated.
But then a messenger arrived from the eastern frontier.
His horse collapsed beneath him at the gates. His clothing was burned. His face was gray with exhaustion.
Eloria received him in her great hall.
"What news?" she asked.
The messenger fell to his knees.
"My lady, the eastern watch is gone. The fortress at Valen's Pass has fallen. We could do nothing."
Eloria stood.
"How many?"
"All of them."
The room fell silent.
The messenger swallowed.
"And there is something else."
"Speak."
"The creature talks."
Eloria frowned.
"What does it say?"
The messenger looked up at her.
"One word, my lady."
He hesitated.
"Eloria."
A murmur passed through the hall.
The messenger continued.
"Over and over. It comes to a village, destroys everything in its path, and calls your name."
Eloria's expression hardened.
Then she smiled.
"So it remembers me."
Her companions exchanged uneasy glances.
Mara stepped forward.
"We should summon the armies. Evacuate the settlements. Find out what we're dealing with."
"No," Eloria replied.
Dain spoke next.
"We don't know its strength. A creature capable of destroying Valen's Pass deserves caution."
Eloria looked at him with irritation.
"Have you forgotten who we are?"
Nobody answered.
She turned toward the enormous tapestry hanging behind her throne. It depicted her first victory, a young girl standing triumphantly over the dragon.
"Eleven years ago, I killed one of these creatures with an old sword and no training. Now I have the finest warriors in the realm standing beside me."
She looked back at her companions.
"Let it come."
Then she reconsidered.
"No. We shall go to it."
The dragon in the east
They rode east beneath banners bearing Eloria's crest.
The people lined the roads to cheer them.
They threw flowers before their horses and shouted blessings. Children held wooden swords, pretending to be their beloved champion.
Eloria smiled and raised her hand.
She felt no fear.
Why should she?
She had become the most celebrated warrior in the known world.
For days they traveled through abandoned settlements and scorched countryside.
The closer they came to the eastern mountains, the quieter the world became.
There were no birds.
No insects.
Even the wind seemed reluctant to move.
At last, they reached a broad valley beneath a ridge of broken stone.
There, they found the dragon.
And for the first time in eleven years, Eloria felt something she had almost forgotten.
Fear.
The creature was impossibly large.
Its body dwarfed the ruined fortress beneath it. Its wings rose like black mountains. Its scales shimmered with a deep crimson glow, as though some terrible furnace burned beneath its skin.
The dragon she had fought as a child could have fit inside one of its claws.
Mara whispered an oath.
Tovan slowly lowered his bow.
Dain stared in silence, calculating distances, weaknesses, possibilities.
Finding none.
Then the dragon turned its head.
Two vast, burning eyes fixed upon the five figures standing on the ridge.
Its mouth opened.
"ELORIA."
The word rolled across the valley like thunder.
Even the horses recoiled.
Eloria dismounted.
Her heart was pounding, but she forced a smile.
"So," she said, drawing her father's sword, "you came looking for me."
The dragon slowly rose.
The ground trembled beneath its weight.
"ELORIA."
She raised her blade.
"You found me."
And she charged.
The breaking of the five
The battle went wrong immediately.
Tovan loosed the first arrow, aiming directly for the dragon's eye.
The shaft struck its scales and shattered.
Mara raced forward, shield raised, as the dragon's enormous claw descended.
She caught the blow.
For half a heartbeat, she held.
Then the force threw her across the valley, her shield splintering beneath the impact.
Dain shouted for the others to separate.
The dragon swept its wings.
A hurricane of ash and stone hurled them from their feet.
Eloria lunged toward its foreleg, driving her father's sword between two scales.
The blade barely penetrated.
The dragon looked down at her.
And struck.
Eloria flew backward, crashing through a wall of broken stone.
Her armor cracked.
Pain exploded through her ribs.
She struggled to her feet, blood running from her mouth.
"Again!" she shouted.
Her companions rallied.
Dain attempted to draw the creature's attention. Tovan searched for a vulnerable point beneath its wings. Serin called upon every protective art she knew, while Mara, injured but unbroken, moved to defend the others.
They fought magnificently.
Against almost any other enemy, they would have prevailed.
But the dragon was beyond them.
Its fire tore through Serin's protective barrier.
Its tail smashed the ground beneath Dain, leaving him buried in rubble.
Its claws struck Mara down a second time.
Tovan's arrows accomplished nothing.
And Eloria, the great champion, the undefeated hero, the woman whose name had become synonymous with victory, found herself utterly powerless.
She attacked again.
The dragon struck her to the ground.
She rose.
It struck her again.
She screamed in defiance and dragged herself upright, leaning on her father's sword.
The dragon regarded her almost curiously.
For the first time, it seemed to understand something about its opponent.
She was weaker than it had expected.
Eloria staggered forward.
Her vision blurred.
Her sword trembled.
"I... am... Eloria."
The dragon answered with a terrible roar.
It raised one immense claw.
Eloria tried to move.
Her body failed her.
The claw descended.
The earth split beneath the impact.
And Eloria was driven into the ground.
Her sword fell from her hand.
Her body lay motionless among the shattered stones.
For a moment, nobody moved.
Then Mara screamed her name.
Tovan dropped his bow.
Serin crawled toward the crater, knowing already that she was too late.
And Dain, pulling himself from the rubble, looked upon the fallen woman who had led them for eleven years.
Their leader.
Their champion.
Their friend.
Dead.
The surviving soldiers began to flee.
The dragon raised its head, triumphant.
The legend of Eloria had come to an end.
The place between
Eloria opened her eyes.
She was standing in darkness.
There was no pain.
No sound.
No wind.
She looked down at herself.
Her armor was gone. Her wounds had vanished. She wore the simple clothing of the girl she had once been.
"Am I dead?"
Nobody answered.
Then five figures emerged from the darkness.
They were tall, indistinct, and strangely luminous, though the light surrounding them illuminated nothing else.
Their faces were impossible to see clearly.
Eloria sensed neither kindness nor cruelty in their presence.
Only an authority so absolute that it made every king she had ever known seem insignificant.
The five stood before her in silence.
Eloria straightened.
"I am Eloria," she announced.
"We know," said the first.
The voice was neither male nor female. It seemed to come from everywhere.
"I slew the dragon of the western valley. I defended the kingdoms of men. I have fought..."
"We know," the second interrupted.
Eloria fell silent.
The third stepped forward.
"And we are not impressed."
The words struck harder than any blow.
Eloria stared at them.
"What?"
"You were given a gift," said the first.
"A purpose," said the second.
"A responsibility," said the third.
The fourth spoke with quiet severity.
"And you mistook it for a reward."
Eloria's anger rose.
"I saved thousands of lives!"
"Yes," replied the first.
"I fought battles no one else would fight!"
"Yes."
"I gave everything!"
The fifth figure, silent until now, moved closer.
"Did you?"
Eloria opened her mouth.
No words came.
The darkness around them shifted.
Suddenly she could see her village.
The burning houses.
The terrified children.
Her wounded father.
And a fifteen-year-old girl running through the flames with an old sword in her hands.
"Look at her," commanded the first.
Eloria watched her younger self leap between the dragon and the trapped child.
"Why did she fight?"
Eloria whispered, "Because they needed help."
"Did she seek glory?"
"No."
"Did she seek power?"
"No."
"Did she expect a statue?"
Eloria lowered her eyes.
"No."
The vision changed.
She saw herself older, seated in her great hall.
She saw her companions bringing warnings that she had dismissed.
She saw frightened villagers waiting for protection while their champion received honors in distant cities.
She saw the faces of people whose names she had forgotten.
People who had believed in her.
People who had needed her.
"Your strength was given so that others might live," said the fourth.
"Your courage was given so that others might find their own," said the second.
"Your power was never meant to make you great," said the third.
"It was meant to make you useful," said the fifth.
Eloria began to weep.
Not because she had lost.
Not because she had died.
Because she finally understood.
She had been entrusted with something extraordinary, and over the years she had come to believe that the gift belonged to her alone.
She had forgotten the people it was meant to serve.
She fell to her knees.
"I'm sorry."
The five regarded her in silence.
At last, the first spoke.
"Your work is unfinished."
Eloria looked up.
"You will return."
Hope flashed across her face.
But the figure raised a hand.
"Understand us. You have already been given more than most could imagine. You squandered much of it. We will not simply restore you to the life you had."
The fifth stepped toward her.
"There will be a price."
Eloria swallowed.
"What price?"
"A fire," it said.
"One that will live within you for the remainder of your days."
"It will grant you the strength to fulfill your purpose," said the second.
"But it will burn you," said the third.
"Every moment," said the fourth.
"Every day," said the fifth.
"Until your final breath."
Eloria stared at them.
"Will it kill me?"
"No," said the first.
"It will not consume you."
The five figures drew closer.
"You will feel its heat when you wake. You will feel it in battle and in peace. You will feel it when you are praised, and when you are forgotten. It will be there to remind you of what you were given, what you neglected, and what remains yours to do."
Eloria bowed her head.
She thought of Mara.
Tovan.
Serin.
Dain.
She thought of her father, and the child beneath the cart.
She thought of all those who now stood defenseless before the dragon.
Then she looked up.
"I understand."
The first figure leaned toward her.
"Do you?"
Eloria held its gaze.
"I don't know if I can bear it."
For the first time, the figures seemed satisfied.
"Then you have learned something."
The darkness began to brighten.
The five stepped away.
Eloria reached toward them.
"Wait. Who are you?"
No answer came.
The light grew stronger.
And just before the darkness disappeared, the first figure spoke again.
"Now go."
A pause.
"And do your job."
Part III: Unbreakable
The Fire That Would Not Die
The battle was over.
Or so the survivors believed.
Smoke hung over the valley. The ground was littered with broken weapons and shattered stone. Fires burned along the ridge where the armies had made their stand.
The dragon stood above the battlefield, victorious.
Mara knelt beside the crater where Eloria had fallen.
She had found her friend's body half buried beneath the rubble, broken and still.
Serin was beside her.
The healer had tried everything she knew.
Nothing worked.
Eloria was gone.
Tovan stood a short distance away, staring at the enormous creature looming over them.
Dain struggled to rally the surviving soldiers, but his commands fell on deaf ears.
There was nothing left to rally them for.
Then, deep within the crater, something moved.
A finger.
Barely perceptible.
Eloria's right hand twitched.
Serin stopped speaking.
She stared.
Another movement.
The hand slowly closed.
The dragon noticed.
Its immense head turned toward the crater.
At first, the creature seemed merely curious.
Perhaps some last involuntary movement of a dying thing.
Then Eloria's arm shifted.
The dragon lowered its head.
Its burning eyes narrowed.
Beneath the rubble, Eloria drew a breath.
A terrible, ragged breath.
And opened her eyes.
The awakening
Pain.
That was the first thing she knew.
Not the pain of her broken body.
Something deeper.
Something inside her.
A burning so profound that it seemed to reach into every part of her existence.
She tried to scream.
No sound came.
Her fingers dug into the earth.
Then she remembered.
There will be a price.
Eloria gritted her teeth.
Slowly, impossibly, she moved.
Her broken body began to mend as a faint orange glow appeared beneath her skin.
She pushed against the ground.
The stones shifted.
Mara stumbled backward.
"Eloria?"
A trembling arm emerged from the crater.
Then a shoulder.
Then the figure of a woman struggling to rise.
Eloria pulled one knee beneath herself.
And the fire began.
At first, it was little more than a flicker.
A soft, golden light deep within her chest.
It pulsed once.
Then again.
Thin veins of light spread across her arms and throat. Her hair began to lift in an invisible wind. Heat shimmered in the air around her.
Serin raised a hand to shield her face.
"What's happening?"
Eloria tried to stand.
The pain intensified.
She faltered.
For an instant, she nearly collapsed again.
Then she heard the screams of the wounded.
She saw the bodies of the fallen.
She saw Mara, bloodied and exhausted, struggling to protect her even now.