17 positioning moves I'd use before rewriting a startup's homepage:
1. Ask every founder, salesperson, and new hire to explain the product in one sentence. Put the answers side by side. The mismatch is the problem.
2. Replace "what it does" with "what changes for the buyer." Features are evidence. Outcomes are the message.
3. Take the last 10 sales calls and highlight every moment that starts with "let me explain what we do." That sentence is expensive.
4. Write the minimum viable message: the shortest version of the story that still lands.
5. Build a grid with five cells: positioning statement, functional description, problem framing, value proposition, supporting arguments.
6. Write the message for each use case separately. "One product, many use cases" is usually an excuse for one blurry homepage.
7. Make a list of the competitors prospects mention. If the list surprises you, your positioning is already choosing your category for you.
8. For each competitor, write the sentence you want your sales team to say when that name comes up. Pls do not write "we're different."
9. Give champions the language to sell internally: problem, impact, why now, why this, proof.
10. Put every important message in a who / what / where / when / why matrix. If a message has no audience, it is probably internal jargon.
11. Audit the homepage section by section. For every feature, ask: "what outcome does this create, and for whom?"
12. Test the headline against the cold-email version. If the two tell different stories, your GTM is leaking.
13. Separate the company voice from the founder voice. "Authentic" is not a strategy for deciding who says what.
14. Ask investors to simplify the pitch, then actually simplify it. Do not add three more slides to explain the original three.
15. Turn the strongest positioning into one activation asset: an objection script, cold email sequence, landing page, or content hook.
16. Score the basics across five dimensions: message clarity, market positioning, value communication, sales efficiency, internal alignment. Fix the lowest score first.
17. Lock the message before the homepage rewrite. Otherwise you are just moving the same confusion into nicer sections.