A lot of the good points have already been said. Here are some points I think I haven't seen made:
(1) It's rare for any parent to stay with schools like these, investigate things, and write their experiences down. If nothing else this is a pretty rare style of firsthand account.
(2) Her depiction surprised me on one dimension: many more problems from the teaching/administration side, and many fewer from the children and their parents, than I expected. In recent years I'd been coming around to the idea that teachers in low-performing schools are in fairly impossible situations, with disengaged parents and limited ways to keep classroom order. Hannah-Jones' take includes some of this, but alleges a lot more negligence from educators, like not checking students' work at all even when it was completed. This is not what I expected, but I've seen relatively few strong firsthand accounts from a parent perspective, per (1).
(3) Standardized tests get a few mentions throughout, and seem to be revealing important information each time, but NHJ looks for ways to minimize them. In one case she notes a student who, she says, deliberately sandbagged the test because she thought her school didn't prepare her adequately and she might as well not try. Even as presented, that low test score is a big alarm bell.
(4) There are a few references to education school-type best practices. NHJ repeats Najya's critique of the way Unison handled disruptive students, but also notes that it was "good educational practice." Similarly, she notes that "studies show" homework doesn't help on academics, but she seems to be happy with Paige's reinstatement of homework when it happens. She never quite says it, but it's certainly implied that a lot of education school ideas may have tradeoffs at best, or be straight-up wrong at worst.